This feels like drinking a can of cold orange Fanta. It makes me want to try writing flash fiction now, and I'll use this as the high bar I want to reach.
Ooh sounds lovely. Don’t think we have those here in the UK. It seemed full of fizzing orange sunshine. I really loved it and we’ll share with my creative writing group if that’s ok?
This feels like drinking a can of cold orange Fanta. It makes me want to try writing flash fiction now, and I'll use this as the high bar I want to reach.
I was envisioning a cold grape soda when I wrote this, but orange Fanta works just as well.
Ooh sounds lovely. Don’t think we have those here in the UK. It seemed full of fizzing orange sunshine. I really loved it and we’ll share with my creative writing group if that’s ok?
I would be honored.
This is one stunning piece of flash 🤩
Wow, thank you all so much!
I'm breathless. This is absolutely stunning. Thank you for sharing your heart, Keti.
“Afternoons when the sun is a hot lozenge of fire” —my favorite line. Loved reading it✨and having flashbacks of my wild childhood.
Wow!